The birds chirped in the waving arms of trees as the trees reached high into the azure sky. We were going on a trip to the beach. As we got to the beach I quickly landed on the beach like an innocent girl. We built sand castles and went fro ice cream. The calm beach waited patiently for me to plunge in. We galloped towards the beach and dodged in . Splash,splash,splash there goes my life. I floating in the water as if my soul will be washed away. The sun went down and so we started to pack up. My body shivered of coldness as snow melting in the sun. I'T WAS A REMARKABLE DAY I WILL NEVER FORGET!!!!!!!!!!
By Norah Maifala
Nice one Norah very intresting recount.
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ReplyDeletefantastic, interesting,and rich language used.good one norah maifala.
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