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Sunday, October 20, 2013

GEMS

These are some gems that i could use in my story.

A sudden streak of light interrupted his memories.
wide-eyed,he watched from the ledge of robby's window as a shooting star blazed between the clouds.
He grabbed the flashlight and slipped silently out.
He had'nt realized how tightly he'd been gripping the seashell turtle until he felt it digging into his skin.
His heart was pounding like the beat of drums.
The ganflint lake glittered faintly in the darkness.
The woods at night were always spooky.And the weakness of the flashlight did'nt stretch very far.
where the one glowing window beckoned,staring back through the darkness like an unblinking eye.
A cigarette dangled carelossly in her left hand.
The door suddenly opened wider,making a loud creaking sound.
He wipped his eyes so she would'nt see his fears trickle down to the crevasses of his face.
She paused and reached around her neck and unclasped the locket.
A warm tingly sensation crept up my spine as a tiger scratched me.
Bustling bodies were roming everywhere since the hurricane started.
As i was drowing in my tears it was like a glacier that was causing a Tsunami.
My tears were creeping down my wrinkled face.

BY: KONESALA MARK ELIA SAGALA

2 comments:

  1. I really enjoy your story konesala you have powerful rich words and keep the hard work.Irene alapati

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  2. Nice Story Konesala it really powerful and it reminds of my grandpa that passed away ! Naomi Poufa <3

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