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Wednesday, September 18, 2013

I'm Brown

I'm brown like a trees leafs in Autumn. I'm brown like the woods of a house. I'm brown like the woods of a house. I'm brown like a persons hair and I'm brown like milo and cofee. I'm brown like the soil in the garden or the gate around it and like the colour brown. I'm brown like the mud that comes when it rains. I'm brown like some of the furniture in our house. And I'm also brown like the other people. I can be brown like chocolate which I always like to eat. I'm Abbiegail Tevaga and I am Brown.

By: Abbiegail Tevaga.

8 comments:

  1. wow very interesting keep it up. :}

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  2. i like how yu prepared your story with a great beginning keep up with the great work abbiegail BY FAITH ANAE

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  3. I like how you describe yourself to different objects

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  4. I like the way you started your story by describing the colour of your skin to different objects

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  5. nice short story of you explaing your self being brown

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  6. I really enjoyed your speech,because you compare yourself to other things around you. keep the good work up and dont be scared to be who you are.Just dont let people let you down abbiegail tevaga.by norah maifala.good effort.

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